Thursday 15 August 2019

Speech


I think the best part about my speech was the ending.
I chose bullying because it is happening everywhere.
I think I could have been more clearer.
Next time I think I should choose a better topic. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is samantha. I really liked your speech. I liked how you talked about the different people in bullying.You speak meaningfully about the topic. I think you could work on talking louder and different tones in your voice.

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  2. Hi Peyton, my name is Jasmine. I really like your speech topic it is great to hear you speak meaningfully about bullying. It made me think of why people bully. It also made me think of that bullying does happen everywhere and to everyone. I had idea that you could use different tones and gestures. but overall it was a very good speech. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintjasmineh.blogspot.com

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