Monday 20 August 2018

What I would to see in my community

I pick littering because it is killing our wild life. This is what I would like to see more in my community the hardiest part was finding the pictures and the easiest part was the writing and choosing the background.I can improve the background of my slide. I think I am a stepping up blogger.      
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  1. Anonymous5 November 2018 at 10:10

    I like your post about wildlife, and I find your topic interesting.
    Maybe you can include more writing on the topic.
    At our school, we do clean ups sometimes.
    What made you come up with this topic. :)

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    1. Anonymous7 November 2018 at 09:43

      Thank you my next topic is a is going to be about animals

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    2. Anonymous19 November 2018 at 09:49

      good topic,I am a fan of animals too

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    3. Anonymous19 November 2018 at 14:14

      what animal do you like???
      I like deer and pugs, deer's are my favorite animal and pugs are my favorite dogs.

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  2. Anonymous5 November 2018 at 10:10

    Hi Peyton I really like how you included some of your own personal comments in your blog post. In our community in Ahipara we probably have to work on not littering as well. Maybe next time you could add a bit more detail in your writing.
    What are some solutions you could maybe use to fix this rubbish problem?

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  3. Anonymous5 November 2018 at 10:11

    Please come visit my blog.

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