To Peyton, I really enjoyed your presentation, it had heaps of information about your year. Thing I would change is spelling, make sure its correct. Overall good work. Ka mau te wehi, Ruby 😁
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To Peyton,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your presentation, it had heaps of information about your year.
Thing I would change is spelling, make sure its correct.
Overall good work.
Ka mau te wehi,
Ruby 😁