Thursday, 14 June 2018

Ship Drawing

This is my ship I used Google Drawings 


   I need to improve my sea because the sea is not flat and I really like the kiwis on the flag I think it really shows the I am from new Zealand.  

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5 comments:

  1. Ocean25 June 2018 at 14:14

    Hi my name is Ocean I like the way you put heaps of information about your ship. I like the shape you used. I like the colours you used. It reminds me of kiwis.

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  2. Anonymous24 July 2018 at 14:35

    Kia ora, I am Amelia A from te hapara School.
    I really liked that you enjoy gymnastics because that was my fav thing to do when i was year 4
    I learnt that your goal is to learn division and you never give up .
    Maybe you could add pets if you have any pets
    Have you tried making your words bolder so they are easy to read
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://”thsameliaa.blogspot.com”>here</a>
    Mā te wā
    Amelia

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  3. Ruby23 August 2018 at 08:34

    Kia Ora, Peyton.
    I enjoyed all your bright colours,
    What I learnt was that you could crop images into shapes.

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